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I work at an auto parts company called YuraCorporation. It produces called wire harness which is like human's a blood vessel. It also mainly deals with exportation and importation. It has a lot of factories in the world. China, Slovakia, Russia Etc. I have worked in my office since 1995. My team name is Custom Clearance Team which is made up of seven. When I was a new employee, I had a lot of my mistake but I learned a lot of things. I was in charge of exportation and importation for a long time. When I was at work, I had to work on the weekend with my co-workers. So I had some stresses. At present, I am in charge of the work that collect data and write a report team for my team. I don't work on the weekend but my new employees have to work on the weekend. I like my job and I am a luck woman for having one. Sometimse, I missed when I was a new employee. These days I have many stresses more than the past but I enjoy it. I want to work in my office for a long time.

Hello [이름] -   Happy Friday! I want to thank you for doing this essay. I also appreciate your time doing this despite being busy at work. I have listed some corrections for you below. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I\'ll talk to you later. ^^   = Teacher Bella =     I work at an auto parts company called Yura Corporation. >> CORRECT It produces called wire harness which is like human\'s a blood vessel. >> It produces wire harness which is like a human blood vessel. >> OR: It produces a wire harness that functions like a human blood vessel. It also mainly deals with exportation and importation. >> The company also deals with imports and exports. It has a lot of factories in the world. China, Slovakia, Russia Etc. >> It has branches in a lot of countries like China, Slovakia, Russia and many more. I have worked in my office since 1995. >> Correct! >> OR: I have been working here since 1995. My team name is Custom Clearance Team which is made up of seven. >> I am a part of the Customs Clearance Team which has 7 members. When I was a new employee, I had a lot of my mistake but I learned a lot of things. >> I made mistakes when I started working with this company and I have learned a lot since then. I was in charge of the exportation and importation for a long time. >> I am in charge of the import and export processes of our products. When I was at work, I had to work on the weekend with my co-workers. >> I also had to work even on the weekends with my co workers. So I had some stresses. >> That\'s very stressful! >> OR: I was stressed.   At present, I am in charge of the work that collect data and write a report team for my team. >> I am currently in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team. I don\'t work on the weekend but my new employees have to work on the weekend. >> I no longer work on the weekends but there are still employees who do, like the new ones. I like my job and I am a luck woman for having one. >> I like my job and I am a lucky woman to have it. Sometimse, I missed when I was a new employee. >> Sometimes, I miss the moment I had when I was still a new employee. These days I have many stresses more than the past but I enjoy it. >> I am enjoying my job even if I feel more stressed now than before. I want to work in my office for a long time. >> CORRECT