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학생이 쓴 원문
I work in my office during the weekdays.
My office produces wire harness which is like a human blood vessel.
My office also deals with imports and exports.
I am in charge of exports with wire harness to Serbia.
I am currently in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team.
It is my main work.
My boss ask a solution about a lot of problems to many teams.
My team leader ask a lot of reports to need a solution about the problems.
So I have to check and collect many data to write reports.
Sometimes, I am angry and have a stress but I still like my job.
I am pleased that my team leader believe me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] -
It is always nice to hear that you are enjoying at work.
That only goes to say that you are dedicated to your job.
Thank you for sharing this to me.
I would like to say that you are already improving on your sentence construction.
Keep it up! ^^
I hope that you are having a wonderful evening.
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow.
= Teacher Bella =
I work in my office during the weekdays.
>> I work during weekdays.
My office produces wire harness which is like a human blood vessel.
>> CORRECT!
My office also deals with imports and exports.
>> CORRECT!I am in charge of exports with wire harness to Serbia.>> I am in charge of the export process to Serbia.
I am currently in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team.>> CORRECT!
It is my main work.
>> CORRECT!>> It is my main job.
My boss ask a solution about a lot of problems to many teams.
>> My boss asks solutions about different problems from many teams.
My team leader ask a lot of reports to need a solution about the problems.>> My team leader asks a lot of reports about the problems that need solutions.
So I have to check and collect many data to write reports.
>> Therefore, I have to check and collect data that I can use for my reports.
Sometimes, I am angry and have a stress but I still like my job.
>> Sometime, I get angry and stressed but I still like my job.
I am pleased that my team leader believe me.
>> I am pleased that my team leader believes in me.
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