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2015-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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When I was young, my family was very poor. I couldn't get the chance to study in the university. It's okay. I have been working since I was 20 years old. I could learn and study in my office while my friends studied in the university. I am in charge of the export and import process. I think it is my major. I hope that after I leave the company, I would study in the university about trade.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] - ^^   Another wonderful composition from you. I appreciate you sharing this to me. You are a very hardworking and loving mother and wife. I admire you for being such. I hope to talk to you later. Have fun! ^^   = Teacher Bella =     When I was young, my family was very poor. >> I grew up with a middle class family. >> OR: I am from a middle class family. I couldn\'t get the chance to study in the university.It\'s okay. >> I didn\'t get the chance to study in the university but that\'s fine. I have been working since I was 20 years old. >> I started working when I was 20 years old. I could learn and study in my office while my friends studied in the university. >> I could learn and study at work while my friends study in the university. I am in charge of the export and import process. >> CORRECT! I think it is my major. >> CORRECT!>> I alreay consider my job as my major. I hope that after I leave the company, I would study in the university about trades. >> I hope that after resigning, I can get the chance to study in a university about trades. >> OR: I\'m hoping to still study about trades in a university after I decided to leave my job. 

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