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학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, my family was very poor.
I couldn't get the chance to study in the university.
It's okay.
I have been working since I was 20 years old.
I could learn and study in my office while my friends studied in the university.
I am in charge of the export and import process.
I think it is my major.
I hope that after I leave the company, I would study in the university about trade.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] - ^^
Another wonderful composition from you.
I appreciate you sharing this to me.
You are a very hardworking and loving mother and wife.
I admire you for being such.
I hope to talk to you later.
Have fun! ^^
= Teacher Bella =
When I was young, my family was very poor.
>> I grew up with a middle class family.
>> OR: I am from a middle class family.
I couldn\'t get the chance to study in the university.It\'s okay.
>> I didn\'t get the chance to study in the university but that\'s fine.
I have been working since I was 20 years old.
>> I started working when I was 20 years old.
I could learn and study in my office while my friends studied in the university.
>> I could learn and study at work while my friends study in the university.
I am in charge of the export and import process.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is my major.
>> CORRECT!>> I alreay consider my job as my major.
I hope that after I leave the company, I would study in the university about trades.
>> I hope that after resigning, I can get the chance to study in a university about trades.
>> OR: I\'m hoping to still study about trades in a university after I decided to leave my job.
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