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학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite restaurant is Ashley's.
It is a family restanurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea.
There are many sushi, vegetables and many more foods.
I like sushi which are very delicious to me also my children like them.
I like white meat which is fish food and fruits.
I can't cook sushi also they are very expensive.
I go the family restaurant in order to eat them.
I can eat not only sushi but also many foods there.
So I think that the food is great and is reasonable in price.
I hope that you read my homework for me because I want to listen to your pronunciation and I have to do practice it.
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! ^^
Thank you for sharing in detail about your favorite restaurant.
You have expressed yourself quite clearly however, try to focus more on the sentence structures.
Good work all in all. You are improving. ^^
P.S.White meat is usually chicken breasts or fish. Fruits are categorized as carbohydrates.
~*~Teacher Bella~*~
My favorite restaurant is Ashley\'s.>> CORRECT
It is a family restanurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea.>> CORRECT
There are many sushi, vegetables and many more foods.>> They serve a variety of food like sushi, vegetable dishes and more.
I like sushi which are very delicious to me also my children like them.>> My children and I like sushi which is very delicious.
I like white meat which is fish food and fruits.>> I like white meat which is found in fish and I also like fruits.
I can\'t cook sushi also they are very expensive.I go the family restaurant in order to eat them.>> I can\'t cook sushi at home because tuna is very expensive. That is why I go to the family restaurant in order to have it.
I can eat not only sushi but also many foods there. So I think that the food is great and is reasonable in price.>> I don\'t just order sushi but also many other food because the food at Ashley\'s is delicious and their prices are reasonable.
I hope that you read my homework for me because I want to listen to your pronunciation and I have to do practice it.See you tomorrow. >> I hope that you would be able to read my homework because I want to listen on how you pronounce and accentuate the words and sentences and I would have the chance to practice it. See you tomorrow.
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