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I have seen a lot of good movies so I consider this as one of my favorite. My favorite movies is About Time. It was released in 2013 and many women liked it. I love the story of this movie because it was a combination of a love story, a drama and about time. Main character of the film can travel time. He learned the value of the time through the time trip. He said "we are all travelling through together, everday of our lives. All we can do is do our best to relish this remarkable ride." I like the sentence. I wil do my best everyday.

Hi [이름]!^^ Good work in writing about one of your favorite movies. I\'ll be sure to watch it. ^^ This movie reminds me of another movie that just came out this year. Its title is The Age of Adeline. The storyline is almost the same. I recommend that you check it out. ^^ About your essay, you write clear, well thought out sentences, however, try to write using complex and compound sentences. Notice the corrections; instead of three short sentences, one sentence is enough to hold what you mean. It is also a good idea to give more detail like why is is a combination of romance, drama and science fiction (e.g. time travel)?   Overall, its a job well done. ^^   ~*~Teacher Bella~*~   I have seen a lot of good movies so I consider this as one of my favorite.My favorite movies is About Time. >> I have seen a lot of good movies but I consider About Time as one of my favorites. It was released in 2013 and many women liked it. >> CORRECT >> BETTER: About Time was released in 2013 and a lot of women liked it. I love the story of this movie because it was a combination of a love story, a drama and about time.Main character of the film can travel time.He learned the value of the time through the time trip. >> I love the story of the movie because it is a combination of romance, drama and science fiction since the main character can travel through time and he decides to make his world a better place by getting a girlfriend. At the end of the movie, he learned the value of time through his adventures. He said \"we are all travelling through together, everday of our lives. All we can do is do our best to relish this remarkable ride.\" I like the sentence.I wil do my best everyday. >> My favorite quote from the movie that the main character said is; \"We\'re all traveling through time together, every day of our lives. All we can do is do our best to relish this remarkable ride.\". This quote inspires me to do my best everyday.