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I usually stay at home on the weekend. I need my rest time. So I always get up late about at 9 am. And then I watch a TV show and have a breakfast with my family. In the afternoon I work many housework on saturday. However I try to spend time with my children. I can't spend time with them on weekdays. So on sunday I go to the park and watch a movie with them. Sometimes I am sorry to them while I meet my frineds on the weekend. But my children understand me. My children are very very lovely and nice.

 Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for the well thought-out essay. Good job in telling me how you usually spend your weekends. ^^Anyway, the corrections made were simple rephrasing just to enhance the comprehensibility and coherence of the essay. Also, try to apply the usage of complex and compound sentences instead of simple senteces. ^^ Keep up the wonderful effort. ^^ Talk to you soon. ^^   All good things, = Teacher Bella =     I usually stay at home on the weekend.I need my rest time. >> I usually stay at home on the weekends since I need to rest. So I always get up late about at 9 am.And then I watch a TV show and have a breakfast with my family. >> I usually get up late at around 9AM. I then watch TV and have breakfast with my family. In the afternoon I work many housework on saturday. >> I spend Saturday afternoons doing housechores like cleaning, laundry and more. However I try to spend time with my children.I can\'t spend time with them on weekdays. >> However, I also spend time with my children to make up for the time lost during weekdays. So on sunday I go to the park and watch a movie with them. >> So on Sundays, I go to the park and watch some movies with them. Sometimes I am sorry to them while I meet my frineds on the weekend.But my children understand me. >> There are times that I meet my friends on a weekend and I feel bad for my children but they do understand. My children are very very lovely and nice. >> CORRECT