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I like to watch movies during my free time. I usually watch movies with my daughers in my house. I think that watching movies is really exciting. Befor I get married, I prefer to watch romantic and comic ones. After I get married, I prefor to wathc animation movies because my children like them. Sometimes I watch a movie with my husband at the theater in Pyeongtaek city. I want to have the free time with my husband everyday.

Hello [이름]! ^^ Good work in your composition! ^^ Thank you! ^^ Your first few sentences were nearly correct however, we need to work on the articulateness or the flow of thought of your paragraph. Check out the correction for better understanding of what I mean. ^^ Also, be careful with the tenses of your main verb. When you say \"Before I get married\", it would mean you aren\'t married yet but you are so it must be changed to \"before I got married\".   Good work all in all. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Bella==   I like to watch movies during my free time.I usually watch movies with my daughers in my house.I think that watching movies is really exciting. >> I like watching movies during my free time because its very exciting for me. I usually watch movies with my daughter at home. Befor I get married, I prefer to watch romantic and comic ones.After I get married, I prefor to wathc animation movies because my children like them. >> Before I got married, I preferred watching romance or comedy movies but after getting married, I now watch animated movies because my children like those kinds of movies. Sometimes I watch a movie with my husband at the theater in Pyeongtaek city. >> There are times that I watch movies with my husband at a cinema in Pyeongtaek city. I want to have the free time with my husband everyday. >> CORRECT