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I like to read books when I was young. After I grow up, I don't read books. I like a book which is short and essay story. These days I read books which are my children's English books. They are fun and easy books but they are not easy for me because I don't know English well. A few month ago I read a book entitled Selfish Giant. I like this book. This book's story is selfish and the children's story. The selfish has a giant, beautiful garden. The children like playing there after school. However he doesn't like them and want to play in his garden anyone. He only likes his flowers in his garden. Howver he know that the children are the most flowers in the world. I like this book which is simple and moral. These days I am trying to read English books but it is not easy for me.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for your composition. ^^ Wonderful job. ^^ I love the story of \"The Selfish Giant\" and I agree with you that it teaches an important lesson about not being selfish. Reading improves sentence construction and enriches vocabulary so I encourage you to keep at it, no matter how difficult it may seem at first. I promise you, it get easier. ^^ Just some reminders, when you are mentioning a title of a book or a movie, enclose the title with quotation marks. (\"~\"). Also, be careful with your verb tenses and the use of adjectives (check out the corrections for better understanging ^^).   You are improving beautifully. Keep up the good work.   ==Teacher Bella==     I like to read books when I was young.After I grow up, I don\'t read books.I like a book which is short and essay story. >> I liked reading books when I was younger especially short stories and essay but when I got older, I don\'t read as much any longer. These days I read books which are my children\'s English books. >> Nowadays, the only books I read are my children\'s English books. They are fun and easy books but they are not easy for me because I don\'t know English well. >> They are fun and easy to read but since I\'m not that good at English, I find it difficult to read. A few month ago I read a book entitled Selfish Giant.I like this book. >> A few months ago, I read a book entitled \"The Selfish Giant.\' This book\'s story is selfish and the children\'s story.The selfish has a giant, beautiful garden.The children like playing there after school. >> This is a children\'s story about a selfish giant who owns a beautiful, expansive garden and children loved to play in that garden after school. However he doesn\'t like them and want to play in his garden anyone.He only likes his flowers in his garden.Howver he know that the children are the most flowers in the world.>> However, the giant doesn\'t like the children and didn\'t want them to play in his garden any longer. He only liked the flowers in his garden but as the story progressed, he learned that the children are the most beautiful flowers in the world. I like this book which is simple and moral.>> I liked this book because it is simple and teaches a wonderful moral. These days I am trying to read English books but it is not easy for me. >> I try to read English books that isn\'t easy for me nowadays.