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2015-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I don't know sport's rule because I am a woman. Many women don't know it and don't like it. However I like watching sport games. When I was a teenager, basketball is very popular to us because of drama. Main character was very handsome boy and he does very well it. Nowadays soccer is very popular Korea because of World Cup in 2002. Also baseball is very popular in Korea Busan city. I want to visit the sports stadium.

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Hello [이름]! ^^ Good work in telling me about team sports in Korea. ^^ I share your sentiment about sports rules. I also am not familiar with the rules. Going to the corrections, its better to say that you are not informed rather than saying \"I don\'t know\". It\'s like in Korean language, where its better to say something else than saying an outright \"no\" when talking about something, right?  Good job all in all. ^^ The rest of the corrections are just some minor grammatical corrections.   See you in class!   ==Teacher Bella==   I don\'t know sport\'s rule because I am a woman.Many women don\'t know it and don\'t like it. >> Most women, like myself, are not aware and don\'t like about knowing sport\'s rules. However I like watching sport games. >> I do, however, like watching sports games. When I was a teenager, basketball is very popular to us because of drama. >> Back when I was a teenager, basketball became very popular because of a TV drama. Main character was very handsome boy and he does very well it. >>The main character in that drama was very handsome and played basketball really well. Nowadays soccer is very popular Korea because of World Cup in 2002. >> Nowadays, soccer is quite popular in Korea because of the 2002 World Cup. Also baseball is very popular in Korea Busan city. >> In addition, baseball is the popular sport in Busan city. I want to visit the sports stadium. >> CORRECT

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