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2015-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I don't like really housework. It is very boring. In my house, I have a lot of chores. I hate them. I have to work many chores on the weekend so I can't have my freetime. I can't cook very well so sometimes my husband cook for my children. I like washing dishes more than cooking. I want him to cook everydays. If I don't have my job, my husband doesn't help me. So I will work in my office for a long time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! ^^ Hahaha! ^^ You really hate house chores that much that you would stay at your office just to avoid them? Good job in telling me about what you feel about house work. You are getting better in writing but lets continue working on the comprehensiveness of the overll essay, okay? ^^   See you in class!   ==Teacher Bella==   I don\'t like really housework.It is very boring. >> I really don\'t like house chores because it is very boring for me. In my house, I have a lot of chores. I hate them. >> I have a lot of chores at home and I hate them all. I have to work many chores on the weekend so I can\'t have my freetime. >> I have a lot of chores on the weekend so I don\'t any free time. I can\'t cook very well so sometimes my husband cook for my children.I like washing dishes more than cooking.I want him to cook everydays. >> I can\'t cook very well so my husband sometimes cooks for our children. That is why I want him to cook everyday. Besides, I like washing dishes rather than cooking. If I don\'t have my job, my husband doesn\'t help me.So I will work in my office for a long time. >> Id I don\'t have to work, my husband doesn\'t help me so I try to stay at the office for a long time.

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