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Hello [이름]!

GOOD WORK! I hope you fulfill your dream to go to Guam. There are only three articles: the, a and an. They are very small words which cause very large problems if used incorrectly. Don’t use articles with languages and nationalities (e.g. Chinese, English, French, Spanish).

example: While staying in Guam, I want to speak English. ( not \'an English\')

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Vacation.

>>>Vacation

I have never been to Guam island.

>>>I have never been to Guam.

So the next time that I travel, I would like to go there.

>>>CORRECT

I want to see many fish under the sea.

>>>CORRECT

I also want to stay at hotel called PIC hotel.

>>>I also want to stay at the hotel called PIC hotel.

There are many activity things and a big water park.

>>>There are many activities to do. There is also a big water park.

I have to save a lot of money to visit there because this hotel is very expensive.

>>>CORRECT

Also I have to go on a diet to wear a beautiful swimsuits.
>>>Also I have to go on a diet to wear beautiful swimsuits.

While I stay Guam, I want to speak an English.

>>>While staying in Guam, I want to speak English.

But it is very difficult.

>>>CORRECT