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2015-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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If I can travel another country, I will bring three things. First, I will bring my passport. I need it when I enter another country and my country. So It is very important. Second, I will bring my mobile phone. I can get a lot of information on the internet through it. It will help me when I want to go many places. Third, I will bring a lot of money. I think a lot of money are very important too. I can stay at the hotel, eat food and buy many things. That is why.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

 

You are a diligent student. Don\'t forget to put prepositions in your sentences when needed. Prepositions are short words (on, in, to) that usually stand in front of nouns (sometimes also in front of gerund verbs). There are hardly any rules as to when to use which preposition. The only way to learn prepositions is looking them up in a dictionary, reading a lot in English and learning useful phrases off by heart.

 

example: If I can travel in another country, I will bring three things.

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

If I can travel another country, I will bring three things.

>>>If I can travel in another country, I will bring three things.


First, I will bring my passport.

>>>CORRECT


I need it when I enter another country and my country.

>>>CORRECT


So It is very important.

>>>So it is very important.


Second, I will bring my mobile phone.

>>>CORRECT


I can get a lot of information on the internet through it.

>>>CORRECT


It will help me when I want to go many places.

>>>It will help me when I want to go to many places.


Third, I will bring a lot of money.

>>>CORRECT


I think a lot of money are very important too.

>>>I think a lot of money is very important too.


I can stay at the hotel, eat food and buy many things.

>>>CORRECT


That is why.

>>>Thoese are the reasons why I need to bring three things.

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