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Hello [이름]!
Well done! We\'re lucky because of air conditioner. Some reminders:
1. Subject-Verb Agreement
Subjects and verbs must AGREE with one another in number (singular or plural). Thus, if a subject is singular, its verb must also be singular; if a subject is plural, its verb must also be plural.
In the present tense, nouns and verbs form plurals in opposite ways: nouns ADD an s to the singular form; verbs REMOVE the s from the singular form.
example: I like spring because spring brings many flowers.
2. Sentences written in the passive voice always contain a transitive verb. Transitive verbs are action verbs that require a direct object.
example: The air conditioner was fixed by my co-worker. (\'Work\' is an intransitive verb. Intransitive verbs don\'t require a direct object.)
Teacher Venus^^
It was very hot.
>>>CORRECT
While I went to my office in the morning, it was warm.
>>>CORRECT
However, after I had lunch in the afternoon, it was very hot.
>>>CORRECT
Air conditioner was worked by my co-worker.
>>>The air conditioner was fixed by my co-worker.
I could work cool because of air conditioner.
>>>I could work in a cool environment because of the air conditioner.
However, some my co-workers had to work outside in the afternoon, I was sorry about that.
>>>CORRECT
I like spring because spring bring many flowers and warm.
>>>I like spring because spring brings many flowers. It is also warm.
I don\'t like summer and winter.
>>>CORRECT
I hate really hot weather and cold weather.
>>>CORRECT
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