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2015-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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It was very hot. While I went to my office in the morning, it was warm. However, after I had lunch in the afternoon, it was very hot. Air conditioner was worked by my co-worker. I could work cool because of air conditioner. However, some my co-workers had to work outside in the afternoon, I was sorry about that. I like spring because spring bring many flowers and warm. I don't like summer and winter. I hate really hot weather and cold weather.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

 

Well done! We\'re lucky because of air conditioner. Some reminders:


1. Subject-Verb Agreement

Subjects and verbs must AGREE with one another in number (singular or plural).  Thus, if a subject is singular, its verb must also be singular; if a subject is plural, its verb must also be plural.

In the present tense, nouns and verbs form plurals in opposite ways: nouns ADD an s to the singular form; verbs REMOVE the s from the singular form.


example: I like spring because spring brings many flowers.


2. Sentences written in the passive voice always contain a transitive verb. Transitive verbs are action verbs that require a direct object.

example: The air conditioner was fixed by my co-worker. (\'Work\' is an intransitive verb. Intransitive verbs don\'t require a direct object.)

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

It was very hot.

>>>CORRECT


While I went to my office in the morning, it was warm.

>>>CORRECT


However, after I had lunch in the afternoon, it was very hot.

>>>CORRECT

Air conditioner was worked by my co-worker.

>>>The air conditioner was fixed by my co-worker.

I could work cool because of air conditioner.

>>>I could work in a cool environment because of the air conditioner.

However, some my co-workers had to work outside in the afternoon, I was sorry about that.

>>>CORRECT

I like spring because spring bring many flowers and warm.

>>>I like spring because spring brings many flowers. It is also warm.


I don\'t like summer and winter.

>>>CORRECT


I hate really hot weather and cold weather.

>>>CORRECT

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