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Hello [이름]!

It\'s great to know more about you. I apologize for not checking your homework right away. I just noticed now. Some reminders:

1. I originally came from Busan and I was brought up in Busan. (There\'s no need for \'am\' here because \'came\' is the verb)

2. I didn\'t get the chance to study in a university because my family was very poor then. (There\'s no need to capitalize \'university\' here. You can capitalize if the name of the university is stated. For example: Seoul University)

Teacher Venus^^

My English name is [이름] and I am 41 years old.

>>>CORRECT

I am originally came from Busan and I was brought up in Busan.

>>>I originally came from Busan and I was brought up in Busan.

I moved to Pyeongtaek-city with my family when I was 10 years old.

>>>I moved to Pyeongtaek City with my family when I was 10 years old.

I am married and I have two daughters.

>>>CORRECT

Of course I have one husband.

>>>CORRECT

I\'m just kidding.

>>>CORRECT

I didn\'t get the chance to study in a University becase my family was very poor then.

>>>I didn\'t get the chance to study in a university because my family was very poor then.

But it\'s okay.
>>>CORRECT

I work at an auto parts company in Gyeonggi-do.

>>>CORRECT

I like my job and I am a lucky woman for having one.

>>>CORRECT

I want to work in my office for a long time.

>>>CORRECT

Also, I want my family to be happy for the years to come.

>>>CORRECT