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2015-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I live in a small city. When I was young, there was nowhere to go shopping in my neighborhood. I had to take bus to the nearest city when I needed to buy something. But a few years ago, an outlet mall was built near my house. People from other cities come to my neighborhood now. My neighborhood is very comfortable now.

강사 첨삭


 

 

Hello [이름]!

 

You\'re getting better every day. Some reminders:

 

How do you get to work?
I …
… drive to work.
… take the bus to work.
… ride my bike to work.
… walk to work.
… take the subway to work.

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

I live in a small city.

>>>CORRECT


When I was young, there was nowhere to go shopping in my neighborhood.

>>>CORRECT


I had to take bus to the nearest city when I needed to buy something.

>>>I had to take the  bus to the nearest city when I needed to buy something.


But a few years ago, an outlet mall was built near my house.

>>>CORRECT


People from other cities come to my neighborhood now.

>>>CORRECT


My neighborhood is very comfortable now.

>>>CORRECT

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