^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You\'re getting better every day. Some reminders:
How do you get to work?
I …
… drive to work.
… take the bus to work.
… ride my bike to work.
… walk to work.
… take the subway to work.
Teacher Venus^^
I live in a small city.
>>>CORRECT
When I was young, there was nowhere to go shopping in my neighborhood.
>>>CORRECT
I had to take bus to the nearest city when I needed to buy something.
>>>I had to take the bus to the nearest city when I needed to buy something.
But a few years ago, an outlet mall was built near my house.
>>>CORRECT
People from other cities come to my neighborhood now.
>>>CORRECT
My neighborhood is very comfortable now.
>>>CORRECT
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