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2015-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I have some friends but I do have a best friend. I met her back in middle school. She was a petite and cute girl while I was tall and a little chubby. We went to school together and played with each other everyday after school. We got married when we grew up. She had a son while I had two daughters. Her son and my firstborn became friends. We couldn't get together often since she lives in Osan city while I live in Anjeong. So we call each other often to talk about our everyday lives like about our husbands, our children and our families-in-law. I am fond of her and I hope to have more enjoyable memories with her for a long time.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   That\'s the best you\'ve ever done. Keep it up.   Teacher Venus^^   I have some friends but I do have a best friend. >>>CORRECT I met her back in middle school. >>>CORRECT She was a petite and cute girl while I was tall and a little chubby. >>>CORRECT We went to school together and played with each other everyday after school.>>>CORRECT   We got married when we grew up. >>>CORRECT She had a son while I had two daughters. >>>CORRECT Her son and my firstborn became friends. >>>CORRECT We couldn\'t get together often since she lives in Osan city while I live in Anjeong. >>>CORRECT So we call each other often to talk about our everyday lives like about our husbands, our children and our families-in-law. >>>CORRECT I am fond of her and I hope to have more enjoyable memories with her for a long time. >>>CORRECT

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