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학생이 쓴 원문
I have some friends but I do have a best friend.
I met her back in middle school.
She was a petite and cute girl while I was tall and a little chubby.
We went to school together and played with each other everyday after school.
We got married when we grew up.
She had a son while I had two daughters.
Her son and my firstborn became friends.
We couldn't get together often since she lives in Osan city while I live in Anjeong.
So we call each other often to talk about our everyday lives like about our husbands, our children and our families-in-law.
I am fond of her and I hope to have more enjoyable memories with her for a long time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
That\'s the best you\'ve ever done. Keep it up.
Teacher Venus^^
I have some friends but I do have a best friend.
>>>CORRECT
I met her back in middle school.
>>>CORRECT
She was a petite and cute girl while I was tall and a little chubby.
>>>CORRECT
We went to school together and played with each other everyday after school.>>>CORRECT
We got married when we grew up.
>>>CORRECT
She had a son while I had two daughters.
>>>CORRECT
Her son and my firstborn became friends.
>>>CORRECT
We couldn\'t get together often since she lives in Osan city while I live in Anjeong.
>>>CORRECT
So we call each other often to talk about our everyday lives like about our husbands, our children and our families-in-law.
>>>CORRECT
I am fond of her and I hope to have more enjoyable memories with her for a long time.
>>>CORRECT
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