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Hello [이름]!

You\'re getting better every day. Some reminders:

When vs while

When is followed by a clause with an activity that (1) is a short interruption, or (2) occurs at nearly the same time or shortly after another activity.  

While is followed by a clause with a same-time (simultaneous) activity and includes a verb expressing duration.

Teacher Venus^^

While I smile, many people can smile with me.
>>>When I smile, many people can smile with me.

I think when we smile, we are the most a beautiful.

>>>I think when we smile, we are the most beautiful.

I am happy when I smile with my family.

>>>CORRECT

While we always smile, we can win from our enemy.

>>>When we always smile, we can win over our enemies.

I want my family to be happy the years to come.

>>>I want my family to be happy in the years to come.

so we should always smile.

>>>So we should always smile.