^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I live in a neighborhood with many friendly people.
One of my neighbors is very close to me.
When I came in this town with my family, I didn't know much about it.
Fortunately, I have a neighbor who happened to be my co worker who helped us.
They give us a lot of information about the town.
Also, when my children were sick, they took care of them while I worked in my office.
I can't forget it.
My husband and I invited them to join us for dinner.
From then on, my family became really close to them.
These days they are teaching my children in their academy.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did that very well. Just don\'t forget this : coworker or co-worker.
Teacher Venus^^
I live in a neighborhood with many friendly people.
>>>CORRECT
One of my neighbors is very close to me.
>>>CORRECT
When I came in this town with my family, I didn\'t know much about it.
>>>CORRECT
Fortunately, I have a neighbor who happened to be my co worker who helped us.>>>Fortunately, I have a neighbor who happened to be my co-worker who helped us.
They give us a lot of information about the town.
>>>CORRECT
Also, when my children were sick, they took care of them while I worked in my office.>>>CORRECT
I can\'t forget it.>>>CORRECT
My husband and I invited them to join us for dinner.>>>CORRECT
From then on, my family became really close to them.>>>CORRECT
These days they are teaching my children in their academy.
>>>CORRECT
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