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If today is national picnic day, when I would perpare for lunch called Gimbap which is very popular food in Korea when we go on a picnic.
It is very easy to make.
I need rice, dried lavers, fried eggs, some ham and some vegetables.
First rice put on a dired laver and than a ham, a fried egg and some vegetables put on rice.
Scond the dried laver rolled up into a itself together.
My children like them.
So I often make gimbap.
If you would visit my country, I hope you would eat it.
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If today is national picnic day, when I would perpare for lunch called Gimbap which is very popular food in Korea when we go on a picnic.
>>>If today is national picnic day, then I would prepare for lunch food \'Gimbap\' which is very popular food in Korea when we go on a picnic.
It is very easy to make.
>>>CORRECT
I need rice, dried lavers, fried eggs, some ham and some vegetables.
>>>CORRECT
First rice put on a dired laver and than a ham, a fried egg and some vegetables put on rice.
>>>First spread the dried laver. Then spread a layer of rice on top of the seaweed. Arrange the ham, a fried egg and some vegetables on top of the rice.
Scond the dried laver rolled up into a itself together.
>>>Roll the dried laver. Then seal it.
My children like them.
>>>CORRECT
So I often make gimbap.
>>>CORRECT
If you would visit my country, I hope you would eat it.
>>>CORRECT
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