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2015-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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If today is national picnic day, when I would perpare for lunch called Gimbap which is very popular food in Korea when we go on a picnic. It is very easy to make. I need rice, dried lavers, fried eggs, some ham and some vegetables. First rice put on a dired laver and than a ham, a fried egg and some vegetables put on rice. Scond the dried laver rolled up into a itself together. My children like them. So I often make gimbap. If you would visit my country, I hope you would eat it.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Wow you\'re a great cook. I want to eat gimbap. Some reminders: Make sure that your cooking instructions are clear. Thus website contains cooking instructions. Check this out: http://www.vocabulary.cl/Lists/Cooking-Instructions.htm   Teacher Venus^^   If today is national picnic day, when I would perpare for lunch called Gimbap which is very popular food in Korea when we go on a picnic. >>>If today is national picnic day, then I would prepare for lunch food \'Gimbap\' which is very popular food in Korea when we go on a picnic. It is very easy to make. >>>CORRECT I need rice, dried lavers, fried eggs, some ham and some vegetables. >>>CORRECT First rice put on a dired laver and than a ham, a fried egg and some vegetables put on rice. >>>First spread the dried laver. Then spread a layer of rice on top of the seaweed. Arrange the ham, a fried egg and some vegetables on top of the rice. Scond the dried laver rolled up into a itself together. >>>Roll the dried laver. Then seal it. My children like them. >>>CORRECT So I often make gimbap. >>>CORRECT If you would visit my country, I hope you would eat it. >>>CORRECT

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