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I am working at an auto parts company called aa corporation.
It is located in the countryside and It was established in 1991.
It produces wire harness which is like a human blood vessel.
Also the company deals imports and exports.
It has branches in a lot of countries like China, Slovakia, Russia and many more.
I have been working here since 1995.
My work is interesting and I get along well with my co-workers.
I think I am a lucky woman for having one.
I am working at a middle company.
So my office is busy and small.
There aren't a lot of employees.
There are two water coolers and some tables for meetings in my office.
We also have two conference room for my employees and staff cafeteria.
In the backroom, there is a photocopier and a fax machine.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Your office seems to be comfortable. You\'re truly lucky. You just need to make us of proper words.
examples: deal
to trade or do business (fol. by with or in): to deal with a firm; to deal in used cars.
mid-sized company
Midsize Companies delivers affordable, best-in-class business solutions.
Teacher Venus^^
I am working at an auto parts company called aa corporation.
>>>I am working at an auto parts company called AA Corporation.
It is located in the countryside and It was established in 1991.>>>It is located in the countryside and it was established in 1991.
It produces wire harness which is like a human blood vessel.>>>CORRECT
Also the company deals imports and exports.
>>>Also the company deals with imports and exports.
It has branches in a lot of countries like China, Slovakia, Russia and many more.>>>CORRECT
I have been working here since 1995.>>>CORRECT
My work is interesting and I get along well with my co-workers.>>>CORRECT
I think I am a lucky woman for having one.>>>CORRECT
I am working at a middle company.
>>>I am working at a mid-sized company.
So my office is busy and small.
>>>CORRECT
There aren\'t a lot of employees.
>>>CORRECT
There are two water coolers and some tables for meetings in my office.
>>>CORRECT
We also have two conference room for my employees and staff cafeteria.
>>>We also have two conference rooms for employees and a staff cafeteria.
In the backroom, there is a photocopier and a fax machine.
>>>CORRECT
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