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I use a computer at work. I need it for almost every task I work on. I use a variety of equipment while working. I use the fax machine in my office. I use it to send important documents to clients. Also there is a projector in my office. I use it to report my presentation. During my lunch break, I often study an English on the internet and check my e-mail. There is a coffice machine in my office, so I can get a coffee while I relax. Sometimes I talk about a lot of things with my co-workers. If there is nothing to do, I like to take a short nap. My office is very quiet, so it is easy to rest during my lunch break.

          Hello [이름]!   You did well in describing about your workplace.  Some reminders: We use no article when we refer to general ideas, plurals or uncountable nouns. examples: I study English. I drink coffee.   Teacher Venus^^   I use a computer at work.>>>CORRECT I need it for almost every task I work on. >>>CORRECT I use a variety of equipment while working. >>>CORRECT I use the fax machine in my office. >>>CORRECT I use it to send important documents to clients. >>>CORRECT Also there is a projector in my office. >>>CORRECT I use it to report my presentation. >>>CORRECTDuring my lunch break, I often study an English on the internet and check my e-mail.>>>During my lunch break, I often study English on the internet and check my e-mail.   There is a coffice machine in my office, so I can get a coffee while I relax.>>>There is a coffee machine in my office, so I can get coffee while I relax.   Sometimes I talk about a lot of things with my co-workers.>>>CORRECT   If there is nothing to do, I like to take a short nap.>>>CORRECT   My office is very quiet, so it is easy to rest during my lunch break. >>>CORRECT