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학생이 쓴 원문
I have seen a lot of good movies and I like romantic comedy movies the best.
My favorite movie is About Time.
It was released in 2013 and many women liked it.
I love the story of the movie. The main character can travel through time.
While he travel time, he finds that time is very important in our lives.
After I watch the movie, I feel very comfortable.
And then I decied that I will live very hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I\'m proud of the way you worked today. Some reminders:
1. Use quotation marks to set off the title of a short written work or parts of a longer work.
example: My favorite movie is \"About Time\".2. Use past tense to talk about the past.
example: After I watched the movie, I felt very comfortable.
Teacher Venus^^
I have seen a lot of good movies and I like romantic comedy movies the best.
>>>CORRECT
My favorite movie is About Time.>>>My favorite movie is \"About Time\".
It was released in 2013 and many women liked it.>>>CORRECT
I love the story of the movie. The main character can travel through time.>>>CORRECT
While he travel time, he finds that time is very important in our lives.>>>While he travels through time, he finds that time is very important in our lives.
After I watch the movie, I feel very comfortable.>>>After I watched the movie, I felt very comfortable.
And then I decied that I will live very hard. >>>And then I decided that I will live very hard.
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