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2015-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I have seen a lot of good movies and I like romantic comedy movies the best. My favorite movie is About Time. It was released in 2013 and many women liked it. I love the story of the movie. The main character can travel through time. While he travel time, he finds that time is very important in our lives. After I watch the movie, I feel very comfortable. And then I decied that I will live very hard.

강사 첨삭

    Hello [이름]!   I\'m proud of the way you worked today. Some reminders: 1. Use quotation marks to set off the title of a short written work or parts of a longer work. example: My favorite movie is \"About Time\".2. Use past tense to talk about the past. example: After I watched the movie, I felt very comfortable.   Teacher Venus^^   I have seen a lot of good movies and I like romantic comedy movies the best. >>>CORRECT My favorite movie is About Time.>>>My favorite movie is \"About Time\". It was released in 2013 and many women liked it.>>>CORRECT   I love the story of the movie. The main character can travel through time.>>>CORRECT   While he travel time, he finds that time is very important in our lives.>>>While he travels through time, he finds that time is very important in our lives.   After I watch the movie, I feel very comfortable.>>>After I watched the movie, I felt very comfortable.   And then I decied that I will live very hard. >>>And then I decided that I will live very hard.

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