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I like many actors, but I like Angelina Jolie the best. She is my favorite actress because she can play many different character types. She also has a very unique face. I like her action and all her movies. My favorite her movie is Mr. & Mrs. [Name] because I like action movie. She donates many poor people to help them. Also she adopte her children and loves them. That is reasons why I like her.

Hello [이름]!   I agree that Angelina Jolie is really charitable. You did great today. Some reminders: 1. If you don\'t like to put an article before  a noun, you can make the noun plural. example: Among her movies, my favorite movie is Mr. & Mrs. [Name] because I like action movies.   2. Nouns should agree with demonstrative pronouns. example: Those are the reasons why I like her.   Teacher Venus^^   I like many actors, but I like Angelina Jolie the best. >>>CORRECT She is my favorite actress because she can play many different character types. >>>She is my favorite actress because she can portray many different character types. She also has a very unique face. >>>CORRECT I like her action and all her movies. >>>I like her acting and all her movies. My favorite her movie is Mr. & Mrs. [Name] because I like action movie. >>>Among her movies, my favorite movie is Mr. & Mrs. [Name] because I like action movies. She donates many poor people to help them. >>>She donates to many poor people to help them. Also she adopte her children and loves them. >>>Also she adopted her children and she loves them. That is reasons why I like her. >>>Those are the reasons why I like her.