^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Most women don't like about knowing sport's rules.
However, like watching sports games.
When I was a teenager, basketball became very popular because of a TV drama.
The main character in that drama was very handsome and played basketball really well.
Nowadays, soccer is quite popular in Korea because of the 2002 World Cup.
In addition, baseball is the popular sport in Busan city.
I want to visit the sports stadium.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Impressive! Some reminders:
1. Don\'t forget your subject.
example: However, I like watching sports games.
2. The correct word order should be like this:
Most women don\'t like knowing about sports rules.
Teacher Venus^^
Most women don\'t like about knowing sport\'s rules.
>>>Most women don\'t like knowing about sports rules.
However, like watching sports games.
>>>However, I like watching sports games.When I was a teenager, basketball became very popular because of a TV drama.>>>CORRECT
The main character in that drama was very handsome and played basketball really well.>>>The main character in that drama was very handsome and he played basketball really well.
In addition, baseball is the popular sport in Busan city.>>>CORRECT
I want to visit the sports stadium.
>>>CORRECT
Nowadays, soccer is quite popular in Korea because of the 2002 World Cup.>>>CORRECT
In addition, baseball is the popular sport in Busan city.>>>CORRECT
I want to visit the sports stadium.
>>>CORRECT
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