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A few years ago, I went to a concert called "Open Concert". This concert is a popular concert in Korea. It held with various genres and different singers. So many old and young people like this concert. I went to the concert with my friend and I could go there with free thanks to her. I listened to music and I spent enjoyable time with my friend. If I would have a free time, I want to go to a concert by my favorite singer, Psy.

Hello [이름]!   This is really nice. I like music too. I just want to explain active and passive voice. In active sentences, the thing doing the action is the subject of the sentence and the thing receiving the action is the object. Most sentences are active. In passive sentences, the thing receiving the action is the subject of the sentence and the thing doing the action is optionally included near the end of the sentence. examples: A concert was held (by Psy). passive voice Psy held a concert. active voice   Teacher Venus^^   A few years ago, I went to a concert called \"Open Concert\". >>>CORRECT This concert is a popular concert in Korea. >>>CORRECT It held with various genres and different singers. >>>It was held with various genres and different singers. So many old and young people like this concert. >>>CORRECT I went to the concert with my friend and I could go there with free thanks to her. >>>I went to the concert with my friend and I could go there without paying. Thanks to her. I listened to music and I spent enjoyable time with my friend. >>>CORRECT If I have a free time, I want to go to a concert by my favorite singer, Psy. >>>CORRECT