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My favorite park is Green park. It is a public park located near my house.
The park is very beautiful.
There are many trees and flowers in the park.
Also, the park has some excrise equipment.
The park is popular with both children and adults.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
That\'s the right way to do this. Keep it up! I would love to visit this park. Just don\'t forget the spelling of \'exercise\'.
Teacher Venus^^
My favorite park is Green park.
>>>My favorite park is Green Park.
It is a public park located near my house.
>>>CORRECT
The park is very beautiful.
>>>CORRECT
There are many trees and flowers in the park.
>>>CORRECT
Also, the park has some excrise equipment.
>>>Also, the park has some exercise equipment.
The park is popular with both children and adults.
>>>CORRECT
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