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My favorite park is Green park which is located next to my house. I like going to the park with my children. My children like to go there. We usually exercise at the park. Sometimes I bring some snack for my chilren. We often stay there all day and we spend enjoyable time.

Hello [이름]! You did great again! Remember this writing rule: CAPITALIZE Geographic places (Pensacola, Pace Boulevard, Okaloosa County, Mississippi River, Yellowstone National Park, Appalachian Mountains, Germany, Africa)   Teacher Venus^^   My favorite park is Green park which is located next to my house. >>>My favorite park is Green Park which is located next to my house. I like going to the park with my children. >>>CORRECT My children like to go there. >>>CORRECT We usually exercise at the park. >>>CORRECT Sometimes I bring some snack for my chilren. >>>Sometimes I bring some snacks for my children. We often stay there all day and we spend enjoyable time. >>>We often stay there all day and we spend an enjoyable time.