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A few years ago, my children wanted to go on a camping trip.
So my husband and I bought a tent first. Also we bought a lot of things.
And then, we went to go on a camping trip for 1 night 2 days.
My chilren really liked it and had enjoyable time.
However my husband and I had very hard time.
So my family didn't go on the camping trip again.
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Hello [이름]!
You are doing much better today. Wow! camping is really exciting. It\'s too bad, you had a hard time. This is more common:
And then, we went on a camping trip for two days and one night.
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A few years ago, my children wanted to go on a camping trip.
>>>CORRECT
So my husband and I bought a tent first.
>>>CORRECT
Also we bought a lot of things.
>>>CORRECT
And then, we went to go on a camping trip for 1 night 2 days.
>>>And then, we went on a camping trip for two days and one night.
My chilren really liked it and had enjoyable time.
>>>My children really liked it and they had an enjoyable time.
However my husband and I had very hard time.
>>>CORRECT
So my family didn\'t go on the camping trip again.
>>>So my family didn\'t go on a camping trip again.
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