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I tell you about soccer instead of baseball. In 2002, World Cup took place in Korea with Japan. Many Korea people who called Red Devil cheered to soccer players. So my favorite sport is soccer which is a very exciting and powerful sport. It is very popular in Korea. The Korean team took fourth place in the 2002 World Cup. I am proud of them. However, after I got married, I became interested in tennis because of my husband. He like to play tennis at the tennis club. I hope my children would learn how to play tennis when they grow up so they could play with their father.

Hello [이름]!   You did a great job again. Some reminders: 1. Subject-verb agreement. \'He\' is singular so a singular verb is needed. example: He likes to play tennis at the tennis club. 2. Be aware of \'prepositions\' and \'conjunctions\'. A preposition is a word which shows relationships among other words in the sentence. A conjunction (abbreviated CONJ or CNJ) is a part of speech that connects words, sentences, phrases, or clauses.   Teacher Venus^^   I tell you about soccer instead of baseball. >>>I\'ll tell you about soccer instead of baseball. In 2002, World Cup took place in Korea with Japan. >>>In 2002, World Cup took place in Korea and Japan. Many Korea people who called Red Devil cheered to soccer players. >>>Many Korean people who are called \'Red Devil\' cheered for the soccer players. So my favorite sport is soccer which is a very exciting and powerful sport. >>>CORRECT It is very popular in Korea. >>>CORRECT The Korean team took fourth place in the 2002 World Cup. >>>CORRECT I am proud of them. >>>CORRECT However, after I got married, I became interested in tennis because of my husband. >>>CORRECT He like to play tennis at the tennis club. >>>He likes to play tennis at the tennis club. I hope my children would learn how to play tennis when they grow up so they could play with their father. >>>CORRECT