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My family and I visited Japan last year.
There were many clean streets and kind Japanese people but they couldn't speak English like me.
I can't forget the famous Universal Studios amusement park in Japan.
It was very exciting.
We visited many places and saw many things.
My family and I found sushi very delicious and I want to eat it again.
I want to visit Japan again with my family. We might visit again next year.
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Hello [이름]!
I\'m amazed. All your sentences are correct. Keep it up. I\'m so proud of you.
Teacher Venus^^
My family and I visited Japan last year.
>>>CORRECT
There were many clean streets and kind Japanese people but they couldn\'t speak English like me.
>>>CORRECT
I can\'t forget the famous Universal Studios amusement park in Japan.
>>>CORRECT
It was very exciting.>>>CORRECT
We visited many places and saw many things.>>>CORRECT
My family and I found sushi very delicious and I want to eat it again.>>>CORRECT
I want to visit Japan again with my family.
>>>CORRECT
We might visit again next year.
>>>CORRECT
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