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2015-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I live with my family. My husband is responsible for making meals because I don't like cooking. However I like wash dishes. My oldest daughter is responsible for cleaning her room. My youngest daughter sets the table. When I am at home, I usually have to do a lot of house chores like cleaning room, wash clothes and many things. My husband doesn't have any chores because he is too busy with work more than me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! You are doing much better today. Some reminders: 1. \'Like\' is commonly followed by a gerund or infinitive. examples:I like washing the dishes. I like to wash the dishes.   2. You need to make your sentences parallel. In writing, parallelism refers to balance and equality. In order for the reader to understand what the writer means, the words must make sense in time and space. example: I usually have to do a lot of house chores like cleaning our rooms and washing our clothes.   Teacher Venus^^   I live with my family. >>>CORRECT My husband is responsible for making meals because I don\'t like cooking. >>>CORRECT However I like wash dishes. >>>However I like washing the dishes. My oldest daughter is responsible for cleaning her room. >>>CORRECT My youngest daughter sets the table. >>>CORRECT When I am at home, I usually have to do a lot of house chores like cleaning room, wash clothes and many things. >>>When I am at home, I usually have to do a lot of house chores like cleaning our rooms, washing our clothes and other many things. My husband doesn\'t have any chores because he is too busy with work more than me. >>>CORRECT

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