^^
학생이 쓴 원문
It was humid. so I don't feel good.
I am a lucky woman because my office has an air conditioner.
Also I have an air conditioner in my house.
These days, in Korea, rainy season.
I don't like the rainy season.
Because when I drive my car, I can't drive it very well..
Also I worry about my children because they have to walk from their school.
I don't like summer and winter but I like autumn.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You\'re on the right track now! Some reminders:
1. Make your sentences complete.
example: These days, it\'s rainy season in Korea.
2. When \'also\' refers to the whole clause, it goes at the beginning with a comma.
example: Also, I have an air conditioner in my house.
Teacher Venus^^
It was humid. so I don\'t feel good.
>>>It was humid so I don\'t feel good.
I am a lucky woman because my office has an air conditioner.
>>>CORRECT
Also I have an air conditioner in my house.
>>>Also, I have an air conditioner in my house.
These days, in Korea, rainy season.
>>>These days, it\'s rainy season in Korea.
I don\'t like the rainy season.
>>>CORRECT
Because when I drive my car, I can\'t drive it very well..
>>>Because when I drive my car, I can\'t drive it very well.
Also I worry about my children because they have to walk from their school.
>>>CORRECT
I don\'t like summer and winter but I like autumn.
>>>CORRECT
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