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Hi, this is [이름]. I am looking for my new house. I prefer to my new house is located next to the subway station because of my children. I want my new house which has two bathroom and three bedroom. I also want the downtown and an apartment to live in. Maybe you can find this house, call me please. I belive you can find it for me. Postscript : I want to move next month. So please a call me as soon so possible.

Hello [이름]!   You really described well what house you want to buy. Some reminders: 1. We use would prefer followed by a to-infinitive or a noun, to talk about present and future preferences: example: I prefer a new house located next to the subway station because of my children. 2. Be careful with your sentence structures.   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I am looking for my new house. >>>I am looking for a new house. I prefer to my new house is located next to the subway station because of my children. >>>I prefer a new house located next to the subway station because of my children. I want my new house which has two bathroom and three bedroom. >>>I want a new house with two bathrooms and three bedrooms. I also want the downtown and an apartment to live in. >>>I also want to live in an apartment in the downtown area. Maybe you can find this house, call me please. >>>If you can find this house, call me please. I belive you can find it for me. >>>I believe you can find it for me.Postscript : I want to move next month. >>>CORRECT So please a call me as soon so possible. >>>So please call me as soon so possible.