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2015-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

My test book doesn't have lesson 32. So I can't study lesson 32. I can't meet my frineds because I am living far away from my frineds. A month ago, I met my close friends. I can hear about my close friend's bad. One of the close frineds divorced with her husband. I was sorry about that. I said "Cheer up!" She looked good and we visited her new house. My frineds and I watched her new house. We also heard about her story. We drank some wine and a lot of talk for a long time. I like them. I can't meet them but we like and belive together.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I\'m impressed because even though you\'re sick, you still did your homework. Some reminders: We use \'from\' with \'get divorced\' and (less commonly) with \'be divorced\'.   examples: She got divorced from her husband. She is divorced from her husband. She divorced her husband.   Teacher Venus^^   My test book doesn\'t have lesson 32. >>>CORRECT So I can\'t study lesson 32.>>>CORRECT I can\'t meet my frineds because I am living far away from my frineds. >>>I can\'t meet my friends because I am living far away from my friends. A month ago, I met my close friends. >>>CORRECT I can hear about my close friend\'s bad. >>>I can hear about my close friend\'s bad news. One of the close frineds divorced with her husband. >>>One of my close friends divorced her husband. I was sorry about that. >>>CORRECT   I said \"Cheer up!\" >>>CORRECT She looked good and we visited her new house. >>>CORRECT My frineds and I watched her new house. >>>My friends and I looked around her new house. We also heard about her story. >>>CORRECT We drank some wine and a lot of talk for a long time. >>>We drank some wine and talked for a long time. I like them. >>>CORRECT I can\'t meet them but we like and belive together. >>>I can\'t meet them often but we like and believe each other.

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