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학생이 쓴 원문
The social network I like the most is KakaoStory.
(My favorite the social network is KakaoSTory.)
I usually visit the site two times a day.
It is my favorite social network because most my friends have KakaoStory accounts.
So, it is a easy for me to keep up with them through this site.
I simply need to log on, and then I can read my frined's posts and see their photos.
It is very convenient.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did well again. Some reminders:
1. You don\'t need to put \'the\' in this sentence.
My favorite social network is KakaoSTory.
2. You need to put the preposition \'of\' here.
It is my favorite social network because most of my friends have KakaoStory accounts.
3. You don\'t need to put an \'article\' before an adjective if there\'s no noun after the adjective.
So, it is easy for me to keep up with them through this site.
Teacher Venus^^
The social network I like the most is KakaoStory.
>>>CORRECT
(My favorite the social network is KakaoSTory.)
>>>My favorite social network is KakaoSTory.
I usually visit the site two times a day.
>>>CORRECT
It is my favorite social network because most my friends have KakaoStory accounts.>>>It is my favorite social network because most of my friends have KakaoStory accounts.
So, it is a easy for me to keep up with them through this site.>>>So, it is easy for me to keep up with them through this site.
I simply need to log on, and then I can read my frined\'s posts and see their photos.>>>I simply need to log on, and then I can read my friend\'s posts and see their photos.
It is very convenient. >>>CORRECT
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