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My favorite cafe is located near my house.
So I like to go there because it has great coffee with delicous bread.
The cafe is very cozy and relaxing.
It is not big but it is two floors.
There are comfortable sofas at the cafe.
Also I can read some book at the second floor.
I can spend the whole day there.
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Wow, your homework today is almost perfect. I\'m proud of you. Just don\'t forget to use \'has\' to talk about possession.
example: It is not big but it has two floors.
Teacher Venus^^
My favorite cafe is located near my house.>>>CORRECT
So I like to go there because it has great coffee with delicous bread.
>>>So I like to go there because it has great coffee with delicious bread.
The cafe is very cozy and relaxing.
>>>CORRECT
It is not big but it is two floors.
>>>It is not big but it has two floors.
There are comfortable sofas at the cafe.
>>>CORRECT
Also I can read some book at the second floor.
>>>CORRECT
I can spend the whole day there.
>>>CORRECT
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