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2015-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hi, I am happy because I can you. I can take care of your house for 3 days. However, I want to know something. First, I need your house's password because I have to go to the market. So when I come back your house, I need it. Can I ask you about your password? Second, while I stay at your house, I want to stay with my daughter. Because she needs my help. So Can I stay at your house with my daughter? Finally, Can you call me for 3 days? I want to hear about your trip. Have a good trip.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Thank you for your effort. In this situation, you need to be specific about the password you want. example: Can I ask you about the sequence of your combination lock? A combination lock is a type of padlock in which a sequence of numbers or symbols is used to open the lock.   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, I am happy because I can you. >>>Hi, I am happy because I can help you. I can take care of your house for 3 days.>>>CORRECT   However, I want to know something.>>>CORRECT First, I need your house\'s password because I have to go to the market. >>>First, I need the sequence of your combination lock because I have to go to the market. So when I come back your house, I need it. >>>So when I come back to your house, I need it. Can I ask you about your password?>>>Can I ask you about the sequence of your combination lock? Second, while I stay at your house, I want to stay with my daughter.Because she needs my help. >>>Second, while I stay at your house, I want to stay with my daughter because she needs my help. So Can I stay at your house with my daughter?>>>So can I stay at your house with my daughter? Finally, Can you call me for 3 days? >>>Finally, can you call me when you have your free time?   I want to hear about your trip.>>>CORRECT Have a good trip. >>>CORRECT

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