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Hi, I am happy because I can you.
I can take care of your house for 3 days.
However, I want to know something.
First, I need your house's password because I have to go to the market.
So when I come back your house, I need it.
Can I ask you about your password?
Second, while I stay at your house, I want to stay with my daughter.
Because she needs my help.
So Can I stay at your house with my daughter?
Finally, Can you call me for 3 days? I want to hear about your trip.
Have a good trip.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for your effort. In this situation, you need to be specific about the password you want.
example: Can I ask you about the sequence of your combination lock?
A combination lock is a type of padlock in which a sequence of numbers or symbols is used to open the lock.
Teacher Venus^^
Hi, I am happy because I can you.
>>>Hi, I am happy because I can help you.
I can take care of your house for 3 days.>>>CORRECT
However, I want to know something.>>>CORRECT
First, I need your house\'s password because I have to go to the market.
>>>First, I need the sequence of your combination lock because I have to go to the market.
So when I come back your house, I need it.
>>>So when I come back to your house, I need it.
Can I ask you about your password?>>>Can I ask you about the sequence of your combination lock?
Second, while I stay at your house, I want to stay with my daughter.Because she needs my help.
>>>Second, while I stay at your house, I want to stay with my daughter because she needs my help.
So Can I stay at your house with my daughter?>>>So can I stay at your house with my daughter?
Finally, Can you call me for 3 days?
>>>Finally, can you call me when you have your free time?
I want to hear about your trip.>>>CORRECT
Have a good trip.
>>>CORRECT
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