^^
학생이 쓴 원문
The sentences below, use it to change it?
First, I need your the sequence of your combination lock because I have to go to the market.
>>>First, I need your the password of your door lock because I have to go to the market.
Can I ask you about the sequence of your combination lock?
>>>Can I ask you about the password of your door lock?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It\'s great that you revised your sentences because at first it was confusing. It\'s already clear to me that you are referring to another locking system.
Teacher Venus^^
The sentences below, use it to change it?
>>>Can I change the sentences below?
First, I need your the sequence of your combination lock because I have to go to the market.>>>First, I need your the password of your door lock because I have to go to the market.>>>First, I need the sequence of your combination lock because I have to go to the market.First, I need the password of your door lock because I have to go to the market.Can I ask you about the sequence of your combination lock?>>>Can I ask you about the password of your door lock?
>>>CORRECT
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