^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I like listening to music.
My favorite music is popular music of Korea.
Especially, ballad is my favorite type of music.
Anyway, I want to know about your favorite music.
What music genre do you enjoy listening to?
Do you like popular music of Korea?
Have been listen to music of Korea?
When do you often listen to music?
Do you sing very well?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Now this what I call a fine job! Some reminders:
1. Check this out to be familiar with \'especially\'
http://www.grammarphobia.com/blog/2011/12/especially.html
2. Have you tried~
This pattern is used in questioning whether someone has tried something.
Teacher Venus^^
I like listening to music.
>>>CORRECT
My favorite music is popular music of Korea. Especially, ballad is my favorite type of music.
>>>My favorite music is popular music of Korea, especially ballad.
Anyway, I want to know about your favorite music.
>>>CORRECT
What music genre do you enjoy listening to?
>>>CORRECT
Do you like popular music of Korea?
>>>CORRECT
Have been listen to music of Korea?
>>>Have you tried listening to music of Korea?
When do you often listen to music?
>>>When do you listen to music?
Do you sing very well?
>>>CORRECT
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