^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, this is [이름].
I heard that you bought a new car.
I envy you.
I already have my car but it is very old car.
I want to buy a new car.
So I want to know about question.
What kind of car is it?
What is the color?
How much is it?
Call my please.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did a great job again. Make your sentences clear and complete and don\'t forget to put articles whenever it\'s appropriate.
examples: I already have my car but it is a very old car.
Call me please.
So I want to know the answers of these questions.
Teacher Venus^^
Hi, this is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
I heard that you bought a new car.
>>>CORRECT
I envy you.
>>>CORRECT
I already have my car but it is very old car.>>>I already have my car but it is a very old car.
I want to buy a new car.>>>CORRECT
So I want to know about question.>>>So I want to know the answers of these questions.
What kind of car is it?>>>CORRECT
What is the color?>>>CORRECT
How much is it?
>>>CORRECT
Call my please.
>>>Call me please.
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