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2015-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hi, this is [이름]. I heard that you bought a new car. I envy you. I already have my car but it is very old car. I want to buy a new car. So I want to know about question. What kind of car is it? What is the color? How much is it? Call my please.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You did a great job again. Make your sentences clear and complete and don\'t forget to put articles whenever it\'s appropriate. examples: I already have my car but it is a very old car. Call me please. So I want to know the answers of these questions.   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I heard that you bought a new car. >>>CORRECT I envy you. >>>CORRECT I already have my car but it is very old car.>>>I already have my car but it is a very old car.   I want to buy a new car.>>>CORRECT   So I want to know about question.>>>So I want to know the answers of these questions.   What kind of car is it?>>>CORRECT   What is the color?>>>CORRECT   How much is it? >>>CORRECT Call my please. >>>Call me please.    

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