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학생이 쓴 원문
I first became interested in walking when I decided to lose some weight.
I needed to go on a dite.
I like walking because it is a good way for dite.
Usually I go walking during the night every weekends because I am too busy.
After walking, I feel very healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I like this one. It\'s direct to the point. Some reminders:
1. \'Diet\' is the correct spelling.
2. Diet- to regulate the food of, especially in order to improve the physical condition.
In this sentence, \'lose some weight\' is logical.
example: I like walking because it is a good way to lose some weight.
Teacher Venus^^
I first became interested in walking when I decided to lose some weight.
>>>CORRECT
I needed to go on a dite.
>>>I needed to go on a diet.
I like walking because it is a good way for dite.
>>>I like walking because it is a good way to lose some weight.
Usually I go walking during the night every weekends because I am too busy.>>>Usually I go walking on weekend nights because I am too busy.
After walking, I feel very healthy.
>>>CORRECT
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