^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I go walking on weekends.
The most memorable experience was when I met my children's friends.
I was walking with my children.
My oldest daughter saw her friends.
I still wanted to walk with her but she didn't want it.
So, I decided to have lunch with them.
After I had lunch with them, I went walking with them.
They looked good.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I really like the way you wrote this time. Keep it up.
Teacher Venus^^
I go walking on weekends.
>>>CORRECT
The most memorable experience was when I met my children\'s friends.>>>CORRECT
I was walking with my children.>>>CORRECT
My oldest daughter saw her friends.>>>CORRECT
I still wanted to walk with her but she didn\'t want it.>>>CORRECT
So, I decided to have lunch with them.>>>CORRECT
After I had lunch with them, I went walking with them.>>>CORRECT
They looked good. >>>CORRECT
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