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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
A happy Friday to you!
Yesterday, you said many of your students would put their classes on hold on our temporary holiday.
You can feel free to take advantage of this chance.
As far as I know, Power English's Korean coworkers already left from their office earlier than usual.
It is somehow unfair for you and other teachers.
My boyfriend just got here from the library and is asking me out.
I think it is a good idea for me to give you some free time today, so I am going to put my class on hold too.
Have a good time with your coworkers and family!
See you next Monday! ^^
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
A wonderful Monday to us! ^.^
First of all, I would like to apologize, because I didn\'t reply to your composition right away.
I am really sorry.
By the way, some of my students really put our classes on hold last Friday.
Unfortunately, others were absent.
I don\'t like tagging my students absent.
I\'d rather see yellow letters than red ones.
Anyway, thank you for giving me some time to rest last Friday! ^^
That\'s all for now! ^^,
See you very soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,>> CORRECT!
A happy Friday to you! >> CORRECT!
Yesterday, you said many of your students would put their classes on hold on our temporary holiday. >> CORRECT!
You can feel free to take advantage of this chance. >> CORRECT!
As far as I know, Power English\'s Korean coworkers already left from their office earlier than usual. >> CORRECT!
It is somehow unfair for you and other teachers. >> CORRECT!
My boyfriend just got here from the library and is asking me out.>> CORRECT!
I think it is a good idea for me to give you some free time today, so I am going to put my class on hold too. >> CORRECT!
Have a good time with your coworkers and family! >> CORRECT!
See you next Monday! ^^>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you on Monday!
[이름]
>> CORRECT!
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