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2015-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to talk about what I do during my lunchtime. During my lunch break, I often study English on the internet and check my e-mail. There is a coffee machine in my office, so I can get coffee while I relax. Sometimes I talk about a lot of things with my co-workers. If there is nothing to do, I like to take a short nap. My office is very quiet, so it is easy to rest during my lunch break. I want to make the most out of my times.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

 

It\'s great that you listen to my corrections. You did great today! Just don\'t forget the difference between \'times\' and \'time\':

\'the times\' = the age we live in
\'Time\' = the pace of your personal timetable

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

I want to talk about what I do during my lunchtime.

>>>CORRECT


During my lunch break, I often study English on the internet and check my e-mail.

>>>CORRECT


There is a coffee machine in my office, so I can get coffee while I relax.

>>>CORRECT


Sometimes I talk about a lot of things with my co-workers.

>>>CORRECT


If there is nothing to do, I like to take a short nap.

>>>CORRECT


My office is very quiet, so it is easy to rest during my lunch break.

>>>CORRECT


I want to make the most out of my times.

>>>I want to make the most out of my time.

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