^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It\'s great that you listen to my corrections. You did great today! Just don\'t forget the difference between \'times\' and \'time\':
\'the times\' = the age we live in
\'Time\' = the pace of your personal timetable
Teacher Venus^^
I want to talk about what I do during my lunchtime.
>>>CORRECT
During my lunch break, I often study English on the internet and check my e-mail.
>>>CORRECT
There is a coffee machine in my office, so I can get coffee while I relax.
>>>CORRECT
Sometimes I talk about a lot of things with my co-workers.
>>>CORRECT
If there is nothing to do, I like to take a short nap.
>>>CORRECT
My office is very quiet, so it is easy to rest during my lunch break.
>>>CORRECT
I want to make the most out of my times.
>>>I want to make the most out of my time.
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