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2016-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hi. These days my daughter has the test in middle school. She studies very hard for last weeks. However her grade gets low. She has a lot of stresses. I know she is very sad because of her low grade. But I am upset to her. I repent but I am upset again to her. I can't control my feeling. So I am so sorry her.

강사 첨삭

Hello,

You are just behaving like a normal mom. I understand why you are upset. But you shouldn\'t be too hard on your daughter. You said she has been studying for weeks before the exam. So maybe she did her best but she just couldn\'t get high scores. Anyway, getting angry at her all the time will only make her resent you so maybe you should find another way to remind her of her duty as a student. Cool down, mommy! See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

Hi.

>>Hi, or Hi!
These days my daughter has the test in middle school.

>> These days my daughter is having her test at school.
She studies very hard for last weeks.

>>She studied very hard for the last couple of weeks.
However her grade gets low.

>>However, she got low grades.
She has a lot of stresses.

>>She has a lot of stress.

OR>> This is stressing her out.
I know she is very sad because of her low grades.

>>correct!
But I am upset to her.

>>correct!
I repent but I am upset again to her.

>>I repented but I am upset again to her.
I can\'t control my feelings.

>>correct!
So I am so sorry her.

>>So I am so sorry to her.

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