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Hello, My name is [Name]-Eo and I am 26 years old, My major was a mechanical engineering for Tank which is heavy machinery for war. I had been worked as a professional solider about five years. At that time I had learned a lot of things. Among the rest of that, the most important thing is that you should do what you want so I remember my childhood seeing many containers are shipped on the vessel and ran to the sea side. At that time, my heart was started to be pounding because it was very exciting so I had decided to be a trader that why I came here and I trust that this KITA academy can train me to be a professional trader and I could have reality working experience of that. It I pass this interview. I will do my best and you will not be disappointed to me.

Hi Harry! ^^ Good evening!   THank you for dropping by the composition board. See you in class! ^^   Teacher Glenda     Here are my corrections: Hello, My name is [Name]-Eo and I am 26 years old, >> Correct My major was a mechanical engineering for Tank which is heavy machinery for war. >> My major was Mechanical engineering for Tank which is for heavy machinery for war. I had been worked as a professional solider about five years. >> I worked as a professional soldier for about five years. At that time I had learned a lot of things. >> Correct Among the rest of that, the most important thing is that you should do what you want so I remember my childhood seeing many containers are shipped on the vessel and ran to the sea side. >> The most important thing among them is that you should do what you want.  I remember my childhood seeing many containers shipped on a vessel and I would ran to the sea side to see it. At that time, my heart was started to be pounding because it was very exciting so I had decided to be a trader that why I came here and I trust that this KITA academy can train me to be a professional trader and I could have reality working experience of that. >> At that time, my heart started pounding because it was very exciting so I had decided to be a trader that\'s why I came here and I trust that this KITA academy can train me to be a professional trader and I could have working experience of that. It I pass this interview. I will do my best and you will not be disappointed to me. >> Correct