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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear. T.Joey
Hi~ ^^
Listening & speaking English is very difficult. so I have black head.
I think that earlier studying is needed.
But when I think it's too late, it's earliest time.
Thanks for your kind class. so I miss and expect your class.
I'd like to speak english very well. so I need your help.. ^^
My pronunciation is not good. so you don't understand my job.
I'm not medical doctor, but O.M.D (Oriental Medicine Doctor- Korean traditional medicine doctor). O.M.D is called Chinese medicine, but exactly they are different.
I want to speak english freely as korean .. ^^
Thank you for reading my short composition.. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there!! Now I already understand your line of work. I heard a lot of good effects of Chinese medicines to many people. When it comes to your English well these are some simple advice I will give you: It's important to build your confidence. If possible, use simple English sentence structure that you know is correct, so that you can concentrate on getting your message across.
Tips: 1. Learning English (or any language for that matter) is a process.2. Be patient with yourself.3. Practice, practice, practice
Have a wonderful and enjoyable long vacation. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Dear. T.Joey>> Dear T.Joey,Hi~ ^^
>> CorrectListening & speaking English is very difficult. so I have black head.
>> Listening and speaking English is very difficult so I already have I think that earlier studying is needed.
>> I think an early stage of learning is needed.But when I think it's too late, it's earliest time.>> But it was too late when I realized it.Thanks for your kind class. so I miss and expect your class.
>> Thanks for tour kind teaching that's why I'm missing and expecting your class.I'd like to speak english very well. so I need your help.. ^^>> CorrectMy pronunciation is not good. so you don't understand my job.>> My pronunciation is not good so you couldn't understand what I was saying when I told you something about my job.I'm not medical doctor, but O.M.D (Oriental Medicine Doctor- Korean traditional medicine doctor). O.M.D is called Chinese medicine, but exactly they are different. >> I'm not a medical doctor but an (O.M.D Oriental Medicine Doctor-Korean traditional medicine doctor). O.M.D is called as Chinese medicine but it's exactly different from medical field.
I want to speak english freely as korean .. ^^
>> I want to speak Englsih freely though I'm a Korean.Thank you for reading my short composition.. ^^
>> Correct
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