영어첨삭교정
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I don\'t have any idea to study other language so far. And there are three reasons.
First, English alone is too much enough for me. Because there is a limitation of the time that I can use, studying other language will make me neglectful of the English study. And there are many things that I have to study at the university. (eventhough it is a vacation now )
Second, English is universal language. Thanks to this, I will be able to communicate smoothly with most of people in the world, if I can do the English well.
Third, actually I don\'t have much interests in the language. I study the English because it is necessary to become a scholar that is my future dream. So frankly speaking, if I am a English native speaker, I wouldn\'t study any language. But, it doesn\'t mean I hate the English. Nowadays, interests to the English are starting to be formed. And I think that\'s because I am becoming more familliar with use the English.
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>> I don\'t have any idea to study another language so far and there are three reasons.
Second, English is universal language.
Third, actually I don\'t have much interests in the language.
>> Or: I don\'t have any idea to study other languages so far and there are three reasons.
First, English alone is too much enough for me.
First, English alone is too much enough for me.
>> First, English alone is too much for me.
Because there is a limitation of the time that I can use, studying other language will make me neglectful of the English study.
>> Because there is a limitation of the time that I can use, studying other language will make me neglectful in my English study.
And there are many things that I have to study at the university. (even though it is a vacation now )
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Even if it\'s a vacation now, there are many things that I have to study at the university.
Second, English is universal language.
>> Second, English is the universal language.
Thanks to this, I will be able to communicate smoothly with most of people in the world, if I can do the English well.
>> Thanks to this, I will be able to communicate smoothly with most of the people in the world, if I can speak English well.
Third, actually I don\'t have much interests in the language.
>> Third, actually I don\'t have much interest in the language.
I study the English because it is necessary to become a scholar that is my future dream.
>> I study English because it is necessary to become a scholar and that is my future dream.
So frankly speaking, if I am a English native speaker, I wouldn\'t study any language. But, it doesn\'t mean I hate the English.
>> So frankly speaking, if I am an English native speaker, I wouldn\'t study any language. But, it doesn\'t mean I hate English.
Nowadays, interests to the English are starting to be formed. And I think that\'s because I am becoming more familliar with use the English.
>> Nowadays, my interest to English is starting to be formed. And I think that\'s because I am becoming more familiar with use of English.
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