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There are two kinds of activities that I like. One is learning about society. And the other is phisical activities that are not too intense.
To be more specific, \'learning about society\' includes very diverse activities. For instance, just taking the lecture, participating in discussion, doing academic club activities.. so on. I think it might be seems like nerd. Of course, I don\'t like studying all day. But I love my major politics which is very inclusive feild. Due to this point, most kinds of activities written above bring me some insights about my field. And I like that feeling. This is why I like learning activities.
Secondly, I like badminton and walk. For I always sitting on the chair, I feel lacks of physical activities. Strolling around the library or village settles this thirst. If there are friends who are walking with me, happiness becomes twice. And sometimes I do the badminton in my christianity club. This activity also solve my thirst for exercise.
강사 첨삭
Hi and Good Evening, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
I found the activities you listed interesting.
I hope that you\'ll be able to do all the things you wanted to do and for you to always find fun in them. ^^
Always take care and see you on Monday.
Good night! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
To be more specific, \'learning about society\' includes very diverse activities. For instance, just taking the lecture, participating in discussion, doing academic club activities.. so on.
To be more specific, \'learning about society\' includes very diverse activities. For instance, just taking the lecture, participating in discussion, doing academic club activities.. so on.
>> CORRECT.
I think it might be seems like nerd.
>> I think, it might seems like I\'m a nerd.
>> Or: I think, it might sound like I\'m a nerd.
Of course, I don\'t like studying all day.
>> CORRECT.
But I love my major politics which is very inclusive feild.
>> But I love my major, politics, which is a very inclusive field.
Due to this point, most kinds of activities written above bring me some insights about my field. And I like that feeling. This is why I like learning activities.
>> CORRECT.
Secondly, I like badminton and walk.
Secondly, I like badminton and walk.
>> Secondly, I like playing badminton and walking.
For I always sitting on the chair, I feel lacks of physical activities.
>> For I always sit on the chair and I feel that I lack physical activities.
Strolling around the library or village settles this thirst. If there are friends who are walking with me, happiness becomes twice.
>> CORRECT.
And sometimes I do the badminton in my christianity club.
>> And sometimes, I play badminton in my Christianity Club.
This activity also solve my thirst for exercise.
>> This activity also solves my thirst for exercise.
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