영어첨삭교정
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I\'m not help people who have problems actively. But there\'re two types of slight problems that I usually have dealt with.
First thing is academic problem. I always have helped friends who feels difficulties in studying before I enrolled in the university. Actually, universities in Korea are ranked, so students in the same university are analogous in terms of academic abilities. So after enrolled in the university, there\'s few opportunities to help friend\'s academic problem.
Second thing is not blaming a person according to the rumors. People are tend to judge other people without experiencing them in person. But I think it\'s dangerous. So I have tried to not have prejudices at least, even though I didn\'t protect and defend them. And one of my freinds said just treating him without the prejudice was helpful to him.
I don\'t know I\'m the person who is kind and considerate. But I readily want to help people who is in trouble if I found them.
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>> I don\'t actively help people who have problems.
But there\'re two types of slight problems that I usually have dealt with.
>> CORRECT.
First thing is academic problem. I always have helped friends who feels difficulties in studying before I enrolled in the university. Actually, universities in Korea are ranked, so students in the same university are analogous in terms of academic abilities.
First thing is academic problem. I always have helped friends who feels difficulties in studying before I enrolled in the university. Actually, universities in Korea are ranked, so students in the same university are analogous in terms of academic abilities.
>> CORRECT.
So after enrolled in the university, there\'s few opportunities to help friend\'s academic problem.
>> So after I enrolled in the university, there were few opportunities for me to help in my friend\'s academic problem.
Second thing is not blaming a person according to the rumors.
Second thing is not blaming a person according to the rumors.
>> CORRECT.
People are tend to judge other people without experiencing them in person.
>> People tend to judge other people without knowing them in person.
But I think it\'s dangerous. So I have tried to not have prejudices at least, even though I didn\'t protect and defend them.
>> CORRECT.
And one of my freinds said just treating him without the prejudice was helpful to him.
>> And one of my friends said that just treating him without the prejudice was helpful to him.
I don\'t know I\'m the person who is kind and considerate.
I don\'t know I\'m the person who is kind and considerate.
>> I don\'t know if I\'m the kind of person who is kind and considerate.
But I readily want to help people who is in trouble if I found them.
>> CORRECT.
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